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I will look for you my dear
At the end of this world
Without showing fear
I will conquer all
Whatever my destiny may hold
Without you, my heart rests forever cold

Keep me alive with your innocent smile
Please bring me back when I’m ready to die
When the hardest of rock is nothing but piles
Of ashen remains over which no one will cry
Love, my dear poison
Forget me no more,
Come back as you swore
From the depths of this ocean
My soul is your soul
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Never say forever

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:iconsevereddreams:
Wow... this is sooooooooo touching... so beautiful... so sweet.... BRAVO!
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:iconpossessiondi:
This is lovely! It has the feel of something my love might write in her lighter, sweeter moments and really that's the highest compliment I could pay.
:iconarkadyforever:
wow umm... I'd like to thank you both for the kindest comments I've yet to see. The poem was born out of a little idea that people don't need someone but rather love embodied as someone. It's also because of a recent breakup, and I guess it was my way of explaining to myself certain things. So thanks again for the comments, I'm very happy you liked it :)
:iconaerwalker:
not bad... not bad at all but methinks you gotta get over her man. just mein 2 cents

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